I can tell you have a good understanding of the food groups and what a balanced diet is. I can also tell you are confident when adding decimals together.
I am just wondering if your writing task is finished?? So far your story sounds very interesting but it does not seem finished.
I also think you could have added a few more labels to this post such as: maths, writing, reading
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Nice work Amani,
ReplyDeleteI can tell you have a good understanding of the food groups and what a balanced diet is. I can also tell you are confident when adding decimals together.
I am just wondering if your writing task is finished?? So far your story sounds very interesting but it does not seem finished.
I also think you could have added a few more labels to this post such as: maths, writing, reading