Fantastic work this week Amani! You have done an awesome job completing the weekly tasks, as well as a couple of extra activities. I especially like the writing you did about the bumblebee and your airport café menu.
Your piece of writing was good and you mentioned some great points such as COVID affecting people with underlying conditions differently. I think you could improve your introduction. This is when you introduce the topic and your point of view. For example: "COVID-19 is a virus that has been spreading around the world. New Zealand currently has the Delta variant in the country is is more dangerous. I believe the New Zealand borders should not reopen because..."
Have another look at the carbon math question. 1000kg = 2 trees planted each year. A tree lives on average for 50 years. How many trees can 1 person plant in 50 years? See if these clues can help with that question.
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Fantastic work this week Amani! You have done an awesome job completing the weekly tasks, as well as a couple of extra activities. I especially like the writing you did about the bumblebee and your airport café menu.
ReplyDeleteYour piece of writing was good and you mentioned some great points such as COVID affecting people with underlying conditions differently. I think you could improve your introduction. This is when you introduce the topic and your point of view. For example: "COVID-19 is a virus that has been spreading around the world. New Zealand currently has the Delta variant in the country is is more dangerous. I believe the New Zealand borders should not reopen because..."
Have another look at the carbon math question. 1000kg = 2 trees planted each year. A tree lives on average for 50 years. How many trees can 1 person plant in 50 years? See if these clues can help with that question.
You also could have added a few more labels to this posts such as: maths, reading and writing.
Keep yup the great work Amani!