Nice work Amani, I like how you set the slideshow out clearly to show us the work you completed. Next time, remember to read the tasks completely so you don't miss anything (building the mash up house on minecraft). I also think you could have picked more maths questions to answer for the week.
I really like the teleportation mat you made. It would be so handy and quick to be able to teleport to a destination. Next time, maybe you could have included some information like how often you can use the teleportation mat...can I use it as many times as I want to in one day? or are there some limitations?
Also next time, please make sure you complete some of the create options!
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love your work maybe next time you could show your Minecraft house.
ReplyDeleteNice work Amani, I like how you set the slideshow out clearly to show us the work you completed.
ReplyDeleteNext time, remember to read the tasks completely so you don't miss anything (building the mash up house on minecraft).
I also think you could have picked more maths questions to answer for the week.
I really like the teleportation mat you made. It would be so handy and quick to be able to teleport to a destination. Next time, maybe you could have included some information like how often you can use the teleportation mat...can I use it as many times as I want to in one day? or are there some limitations?
Also next time, please make sure you complete some of the create options!